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Prof. Layton: Like My Father by ~Charlett:iconCharlett:



“Just one puzzle?  Someone that strapping should be able to figure this one out easily!” The woman giggled, waving a fan of cards in front of her face.

“I would normally accept,” the professor said, crossing his arms in thought, “But frankly, Madam, we have little time and must be off.”

“Shouldn’t take you nary a moment for someone with your brains!” Martha proclaimed, a smile on her face, “Try it out, that is, unless you don’t think you can handle it?”

“The nerve!” Little Luke shouted, “The Professor can solve anything; we’re just busy right now!”

“Luke,” the professor chastised his apprentice, “It’s rude to raise your voice to a lady.”  He touched the rim of his top hat and smiled in the woman’s direction, “Madam, please tell us what puzzle you have for us today.”

“Right then!”  Martha crowed, fanning herself with her cards, “Now then, the puzzle.  The chance of rolling a three on a die is one in six, and the chance of rolling two threes in a row on a normal die is one in thirty-six.  If you roll two threes in a row, what is the chance that you will roll yet another three?”

Luke’s jaw dropped.  He fumbled with the math, “Six… times six is thirty-six… thirty-six times six is…”

“Have you figured it out, Luke?” Professor Layton asked.  Luke swerved to stare at him.

“You’ve already figured it out, Professor?” The boy asked, “My, you’re a whiz at math, too!”

“There is no real math equation in this puzzle, My Boy,” the professor said, “Every puzzle has an answer, and Luke, here’s my answer!”

“My, you got it right immediately!” Martha said; she wasn’t surprised a bit, “So smart and handsome, it’s a wonder no one’s picked you up by now!”  Luke frowned a bit at the woman as she continued, “Are you on your way to the tower?  Shall I accompany you?”

“Madam, I was under the impression that you were afraid of the place,” Layton said.  Luke knew that his mentor wasn’t under any impression; he was just being polite, like usual.  The child frowned at the woman as she replied:

“Oh, I am!” Martha giggled, “But if I was with you, Professor, I’m suuuure I could gather up the courage!  The two of us, exploring a scary tower…!”

The two of them!?  Where did Luke fit in all of that?  The child grabbed Professor Layton’s coat, “While that’s all well and good,” the teenager said haughtily, “I’m sure we can do it ourselves.  Come on, Professor.”

“Now Luke, you know that a gentleman never dismisses what a lady has to say,” Layton said.  Luke tried very hard not to say that he never saw a lady that looked like THAT, but bit his tongue back.

“Are you sure you wouldn’t want a little ‘feminine’ company, Professor?” Martha asked.  Luke yanked on the professor’s coat, and Layton went walking off.

“Perhaps we shall discuss this another time, Madam,” he said quickly as he fell in step with his apprentice.

“Come visit some time, you tall glass of hot, dark chocolate!” Martha waved them off with her card fan.  Layton continued walking alongside the infuriated Luke until they went around a corner and were out of earshot.

“What was that all about, Luke?”  Professor Layton asked as they continued on.

“Don’t you know what it’s about, Professor?” Luke pouted.

“Of course I do, but it’s better if you say it aloud.  It’s always better to say what’s on your mind rather than to bottle it up,” the professor replied.  Luke’s pout began to disappear; the professor was right, like usual…

“I just… she was just getting on my nerves, that’s why!  We didn’t even ask her to come!” Luke fumed, “It’s rude to invite yourself places!”

“Two wrongs don’t make a right, Luke,” Professor Layton said.  He said it softly but the words were sharp, and they made the young man wince, “you weren’t very kind to her.”

“But she said that it would only be the two of you!” Luke suddenly shouted.  Layton wasn’t surprised at Luke’s outburst.  He was holding it in the whole time.  Luke grasped the handle of his bag and wrung it as he stared into his mentor’s eyes, “Professor, to go without me, you wouldn’t!”

“Luke, whatever gave you an idea like that?” the professor asked calmly, his face showing no hint of emotion, just cool calculation.

The child bit his lip and looked away, “I’m just… you’re the professor… you’re… you’re like my father.”

And that’s when the conversation started getting interesting.  Young Luke grabbed Professor Layton’s sleeve and clutched hard, “Please, Professor.  Please don’t ever leave me alone.”

“Luke…” Layton knew that time was of the essence, but with Luke the way he was, there was no way he could solve the puzzles that lay ahead.  And so, he dealt with the problem before him, “Now now, no more tears.  I never said anything about leaving you.  Come now, My Boy.  You know that a gentleman needs not make a spectacle of himself.”

Luke held onto the professor tighter, “Then for the moment, can I not be a gentleman?”  He snuggled into the man’s coat, “For now, I just want to be Luke.”

Professor Layton found that they were walking again, which solved the problem for now.  The man looked down at his apprentice as the two walked alongside each other, and he slowed his strides for the teenager.  Lifting his arm, he placed it around Luke’s shoulder and squeezed tight, “Right then, Luke.  But when we get to the tower, I expect you to be on your best behavior for anyone we meet in there.”

Luke smiled, his eyes closed in delight and his face buried in his Father’s coat, “Alright, Professor.  That’s a promise.”

The End!
©2008-2009 ~Charlett
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Author's Comments

Totally beat Professor Layton and the Curious Village in about three days. Wonderful puzzles abound in it. You guys would do well to check it out. It's like using a puzzle book with a story.

Anyway, here's my tribute to it. Silly Layton; all the women love him, and poor Luke is afraid someone will move in and take the professor away.

I didn't put the answer to the puzzle because it's an actual puzzle in the game and I don't want to inadvertently give it away. Do the puzzles on your own, people! They're hard but rewarding!

Layton and his posse (c) Level 5
Story (c) mostly Level 5 but kinda me too.

Also people? PLEAAAAASE stop writing LaytonxLuke so horribly. A relationship written OOC like I've been seeing is stupid and dumb, not to mention the pairing itself totally cheapens the adorable father+son/mentor+apprentice relationship they already have. So stop writing them all OOC and make some good fanstuff for everyone to enjoy~

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p-people actually write LaytonxLuke O.O ewwwwwww... wouldn't that be statutory rape?!
That was very cute though!

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"All who exalt themselves will be humbled. And all who humble themselves will be exalted."-Gospel of Matthew I believe in Jesus Christ as my savior."Don't let's be silly!"-The Mad Hatter(c)Disney. I didn't say that the first time, whoops
:iconcharlett:
Uhm... yeah, if there's two people who are close in any way, then most likely someone will pair them up.

Not that I don't mind gay relationships or pairs where there's an age gap, it's just that I would much prefer having a world that doesn't revolve wholly and totally around the cutest/hottest dudes having sex for the hell of it.

Layton and Luke's relationship is purely platonic. I want it to stay like that; it's cuter that way.

Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for the comment =D

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"I... I knew that... I was just testing you!"

-Booster

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"Push the Button, Max!"
-Professor Fate

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"Here lies Scout. He ran fast, and died a virgin."
-Spy
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“Then for the moment, can I not be a gentleman?” ... “For now, I just want to be Luke.”

aldsjfklsadfhlsd
*arrow`d!*
THAT. AGH. ♥


...yespls on the Layton/Luke thing D;
i mean, i can take it as a joke... but in a serious way, not a fan of it :/
:iconcharlett:
Well, I'm glad you liked Luke there. I was going "EWW, I'm writing MUSH. Maybe next time I'll write about Layton fencing someone through the heart and describe it in gory detail to balance out the fluff!"

Naw but seriously Luke wasn't too OOC, was he? It seemed that way for me D=

Also YES. Parody stories and art with crack pairings is funny, but I've seriously seen like rabid fangirls like orgasm over the fact that Luke starts growing up in the future games.

"OMFG HES AN ADUTL NAO LETS MAEK TEM HAVE SEX LOL!!!"

Seriously, it's just dumb. Not EVERY relationship magically turns into hot steamy love affairs. If that were true, I'd be getting a ton more action than I have these past few years.

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"I... I knew that... I was just testing you!"

-Booster

--
"Push the Button, Max!"
-Professor Fate

--
"Here lies Scout. He ran fast, and died a virgin."
-Spy
:iconraimeiuta:
.... that was PERFECT ;A; You wrote this so well, and all the dialogue seems in character. Ah Luuuuke, you are so cute. XD

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.: so sweet I can hardly speak :.
:iconnachansada:
lol, then Layton turns into EmoLayton and angsts over that he just killed someone D:

Hahaha, not at all! Though, i did feel some sort of... rushed feeling as i was reading. i dunno, touching-y stuff usually feels slow.... or something. i dont know what im saying anymore XD;;

omgiknow! D:
and im pretty sure Luke wouldnt really be all "Oh professor~ ;D" at that age. he`d be confused at romance, i think! (? lol)
though, i am learning to tolerate it more. Not totally accepting it, but.. eh. Whatever *shrug*
:iconcharlett:
The only problem is that that's ALL it is. Constant Luke going "Oh Professor I <3 you Soooooooo much!" It's not even quasi believable.

Coupled with a pairing that really doesn't work well, and you got the makings of disaster.

--
"I... I knew that... I was just testing you!"

-Booster

--
"Push the Button, Max!"
-Professor Fate

--
"Here lies Scout. He ran fast, and died a virgin."
-Spy
:iconcharlett:
Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

It really does seem in character? I guess my friend was right. It seems rushed. I just didn't want to drag it on, for fear of too much wangsting and then suddenly everything would spiral down into a huge emofest of DOOM.

Also I have no idea what I'm talking about.

Thanks for the comment~ = D

--
"I... I knew that... I was just testing you!"

-Booster

--
"Push the Button, Max!"
-Professor Fate

--
"Here lies Scout. He ran fast, and died a virgin."
-Spy
:iconyonarai:
*raises hand* Um...I kind of ship Layton x Legal!Luke, just a little bit. But the way I ship it isn't like Luke and Layton being 'omgomgogmg ilu so muchiez~'. That'd be gross :B
I'd like to think the ship's a little more complex (and one-sided) than that. And complex pairings that SHOULDN'T work are usually more interesting for me to contemplate...Although, that being said, my favourite pairing in Layton is Luke x Flora : D;
I think it's possible to sorta ship it, and still appreciate how wonderful their platonic relationship is...

Sorry, it's just your last comment got to me XD; 'cuz what I've seen of this fandom is really tolerant towards each others' ships! Regardless of what we like we all get along anyway and solve some freakin' puzzles, y/y?
:3

Anyway, ONTO THE ACTUAL FIC ITSELF.

This moment - the Martha moment - was one of the cutest things in the whole freakin' game to me! Poor Luke, feeling all left out and abandoned; he does seem like the sort, to me, who wants every minute of the Professor to himself, and gets threatened easily. Especially by old women who play cards.

And it's SO like Layton to go all stoic and proper at the sight of emotion. Stiff upper lip! It was really subtle how you blended the in-game events into what was essentially your own story, and I really liked your dialogue (especially 'I just want to be Luke' - ;o;!!)

Oh yes, and the little hug at the end was so wonderfully understated. Perfectly-in character. I loved it.

The only criticism I have is that it seemed to move a little quicker at the end, as opposed to the rest of the story...? but it didn't hinder my enjoyment of it at all, and so it's getting :+fav:'d.

Great job!

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This is my song for you, 眠ることのない思い...
:iconcharlett:
Well, from what I've seen of the LaytonxLuke around the place, it's always because Layton's taking advantage of his authority over Luke or Luke is being uncharacteristically horny. It doesn't work that way.

If people make it slightly believable, then I won't hate it as much, but the problem is that people DON'T. And that's what bugs me.

Even if I did tolerate it like I do LaytonxFlora or LukexFlora or LaytonxMartha or DahliaxMatthew, you won't see me writing it, but whatev. *shot*

Also thanks for your longer than normal comment. It's always nice to see what people actually liked about certain parts of the story aside from "Omfg kawaii!!!"

I'm glad I kept everyone in character. I kept feeling that Layton was being TOO emotionless; that people would think he's a robot or summin. And then I was punching myself in the face for writing clingy!Luke because Luke seems more like the type to punch people in the face rather than actually talking about his problems. Well, I guess he'd talk to the Professor about them, so I guess it wasn't as OOC as I thought.

Also as I said before, the ending went quickly because of my unnatural abhoration of anything fluff. If I read fluff in another person's story, I go "Psh, stuuuuuupid", and stop reading. Usually I'm doing drama, humor or action. Therefore, whenever there's a story that has too much fluff in it, I tend to fast forward because it bores me out and I go "Psh, no one wants to read this drivel."

God, I'm such an idiot. Maybe I'll try and tweak it a bit at the end, see if it's better. Thanks for your input~

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"I... I knew that... I was just testing you!"

-Booster

--
"Push the Button, Max!"
-Professor Fate

--
"Here lies Scout. He ran fast, and died a virgin."
-Spy

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