Just one puzzle? Someone that strapping should be able to figure this one out easily! The woman giggled, waving a fan of cards in front of her face.
I would normally accept, the professor said, crossing his arms in thought, But frankly, Madam, we have little time and must be off.
Shouldnt take you nary a moment for someone with your brains! Martha proclaimed, a smile on her face, Try it out, that is, unless you dont think you can handle it?
The nerve! Little Luke shouted, The Professor can solve anything; were just busy right now!
Luke, the professor chastised his apprentice, Its rude to raise your voice to a lady. He touched the rim of his top hat and smiled in the womans direction, Madam, please tell us what puzzle you have for us today.
Right then! Martha crowed, fanning herself with her cards, Now then, the puzzle. The chance of rolling a three on a die is one in six, and the chance of rolling two threes in a row on a normal die is one in thirty-six. If you roll two threes in a row, what is the chance that you will roll yet another three?
Lukes jaw dropped. He fumbled with the math, Six
times six is thirty-six
thirty-six times six is
Have you figured it out, Luke? Professor Layton asked. Luke swerved to stare at him.
Youve already figured it out, Professor? The boy asked, My, youre a whiz at math, too!
There is no real math equation in this puzzle, My Boy, the professor said, Every puzzle has an answer, and Luke, heres my answer!
My, you got it right immediately! Martha said; she wasnt surprised a bit, So smart and handsome, its a wonder no ones picked you up by now! Luke frowned a bit at the woman as she continued, Are you on your way to the tower? Shall I accompany you?
Madam, I was under the impression that you were afraid of the place, Layton said. Luke knew that his mentor wasnt under any impression; he was just being polite, like usual. The child frowned at the woman as she replied:
Oh, I am! Martha giggled, But if I was with you, Professor, Im suuuure I could gather up the courage! The two of us, exploring a scary tower
!
The two of them!? Where did Luke fit in all of that? The child grabbed Professor Laytons coat, While thats all well and good, the teenager said haughtily, Im sure we can do it ourselves. Come on, Professor.
Now Luke, you know that a gentleman never dismisses what a lady has to say, Layton said. Luke tried very hard not to say that he never saw a lady that looked like THAT, but bit his tongue back.
Are you sure you wouldnt want a little feminine company, Professor? Martha asked. Luke yanked on the professors coat, and Layton went walking off.
Perhaps we shall discuss this another time, Madam, he said quickly as he fell in step with his apprentice.
Come visit some time, you tall glass of hot, dark chocolate! Martha waved them off with her card fan. Layton continued walking alongside the infuriated Luke until they went around a corner and were out of earshot.
What was that all about, Luke? Professor Layton asked as they continued on.
Dont you know what its about, Professor? Luke pouted.
Of course I do, but its better if you say it aloud. Its always better to say whats on your mind rather than to bottle it up, the professor replied. Lukes pout began to disappear; the professor was right, like usual
I just
she was just getting on my nerves, thats why! We didnt even ask her to come! Luke fumed, Its rude to invite yourself places!
Two wrongs dont make a right, Luke, Professor Layton said. He said it softly but the words were sharp, and they made the young man wince, you werent very kind to her.
But she said that it would only be the two of you! Luke suddenly shouted. Layton wasnt surprised at Lukes outburst. He was holding it in the whole time. Luke grasped the handle of his bag and wrung it as he stared into his mentors eyes, Professor, to go without me, you wouldnt!
Luke, whatever gave you an idea like that? the professor asked calmly, his face showing no hint of emotion, just cool calculation.
The child bit his lip and looked away, Im just
youre the professor
youre
youre like my father.
And thats when the conversation started getting interesting. Young Luke grabbed Professor Laytons sleeve and clutched hard, Please, Professor. Please dont ever leave me alone.
Luke
Layton knew that time was of the essence, but with Luke the way he was, there was no way he could solve the puzzles that lay ahead. And so, he dealt with the problem before him, Now now, no more tears. I never said anything about leaving you. Come now, My Boy. You know that a gentleman needs not make a spectacle of himself.
Luke held onto the professor tighter, Then for the moment, can I not be a gentleman? He snuggled into the mans coat, For now, I just want to be Luke.
Professor Layton found that they were walking again, which solved the problem for now. The man looked down at his apprentice as the two walked alongside each other, and he slowed his strides for the teenager. Lifting his arm, he placed it around Lukes shoulder and squeezed tight, Right then, Luke. But when we get to the tower, I expect you to be on your best behavior for anyone we meet in there.
Luke smiled, his eyes closed in delight and his face buried in his Fathers coat, Alright, Professor. Thats a promise.
The End!













Comments
That was very cute though!
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"All who exalt themselves will be humbled. And all who humble themselves will be exalted."-Gospel of Matthew I believe in Jesus Christ as my savior."Don't let's be silly!"-The Mad Hatter(c)Disney. I didn't say that the first time, whoops
Not that I don't mind gay relationships or pairs where there's an age gap, it's just that I would much prefer having a world that doesn't revolve wholly and totally around the cutest/hottest dudes having sex for the hell of it.
Layton and Luke's relationship is purely platonic. I want it to stay like that; it's cuter that way.
Anyway, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for the comment
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"I... I knew that... I was just testing you!"
-Booster
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"Push the Button, Max!"
-Professor Fate
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"Here lies Scout. He ran fast, and died a virgin."
-Spy
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THAT. AGH. ♥
...yespls on the Layton/Luke thing D;
i mean, i can take it as a joke... but in a serious way, not a fan of it :/
Naw but seriously Luke wasn't too OOC, was he? It seemed that way for me D=
Also YES. Parody stories and art with crack pairings is funny, but I've seriously seen like rabid fangirls like orgasm over the fact that Luke starts growing up in the future games.
"OMFG HES AN ADUTL NAO LETS MAEK TEM HAVE SEX LOL!!!"
Seriously, it's just dumb. Not EVERY relationship magically turns into hot steamy love affairs. If that were true, I'd be getting a ton more action than I have these past few years.
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"I... I knew that... I was just testing you!"
-Booster
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"Push the Button, Max!"
-Professor Fate
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"Here lies Scout. He ran fast, and died a virgin."
-Spy
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.: so sweet I can hardly speak :.
Hahaha, not at all! Though, i did feel some sort of... rushed feeling as i was reading. i dunno, touching-y stuff usually feels slow.... or something. i dont know what im saying anymore XD;;
omgiknow! D:
and im pretty sure Luke wouldnt really be all "Oh professor~ ;D" at that age. he`d be confused at romance, i think! (? lol)
though, i am learning to tolerate it more. Not totally accepting it, but.. eh. Whatever *shrug*
Coupled with a pairing that really doesn't work well, and you got the makings of disaster.
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"I... I knew that... I was just testing you!"
-Booster
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"Push the Button, Max!"
-Professor Fate
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"Here lies Scout. He ran fast, and died a virgin."
-Spy
It really does seem in character? I guess my friend was right. It seems rushed. I just didn't want to drag it on, for fear of too much wangsting and then suddenly everything would spiral down into a huge emofest of DOOM.
Also I have no idea what I'm talking about.
Thanks for the comment~ = D
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"I... I knew that... I was just testing you!"
-Booster
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"Push the Button, Max!"
-Professor Fate
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"Here lies Scout. He ran fast, and died a virgin."
-Spy
I'd like to think the ship's a little more complex (and one-sided) than that. And complex pairings that SHOULDN'T work are usually more interesting for me to contemplate...Although, that being said, my favourite pairing in Layton is Luke x Flora : D;
I think it's possible to sorta ship it, and still appreciate how wonderful their platonic relationship is...
Sorry, it's just your last comment got to me XD; 'cuz what I've seen of this fandom is really tolerant towards each others' ships! Regardless of what we like we all get along anyway and solve some freakin' puzzles, y/y? :3
Anyway, ONTO THE ACTUAL FIC ITSELF.
This moment - the Martha moment - was one of the cutest things in the whole freakin' game to me! Poor Luke, feeling all left out and abandoned; he does seem like the sort, to me, who wants every minute of the Professor to himself, and gets threatened easily. Especially by old women who play cards.
And it's SO like Layton to go all stoic and proper at the sight of emotion. Stiff upper lip! It was really subtle how you blended the in-game events into what was essentially your own story, and I really liked your dialogue (especially 'I just want to be Luke' - ;o;!!)
Oh yes, and the little hug at the end was so wonderfully understated. Perfectly-in character. I loved it.
The only criticism I have is that it seemed to move a little quicker at the end, as opposed to the rest of the story...? but it didn't hinder my enjoyment of it at all, and so it's getting
Great job!
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This is my song for you, 眠ることのない思い...
If people make it slightly believable, then I won't hate it as much, but the problem is that people DON'T. And that's what bugs me.
Even if I did tolerate it like I do LaytonxFlora or LukexFlora or LaytonxMartha or DahliaxMatthew, you won't see me writing it, but whatev. *shot*
Also thanks for your longer than normal comment. It's always nice to see what people actually liked about certain parts of the story aside from "Omfg kawaii!!!"
I'm glad I kept everyone in character. I kept feeling that Layton was being TOO emotionless; that people would think he's a robot or summin. And then I was punching myself in the face for writing clingy!Luke because Luke seems more like the type to punch people in the face rather than actually talking about his problems. Well, I guess he'd talk to the Professor about them, so I guess it wasn't as OOC as I thought.
Also as I said before, the ending went quickly because of my unnatural abhoration of anything fluff. If I read fluff in another person's story, I go "Psh, stuuuuuupid", and stop reading. Usually I'm doing drama, humor or action. Therefore, whenever there's a story that has too much fluff in it, I tend to fast forward because it bores me out and I go "Psh, no one wants to read this drivel."
God, I'm such an idiot. Maybe I'll try and tweak it a bit at the end, see if it's better. Thanks for your input~
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"I... I knew that... I was just testing you!"
-Booster
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"Push the Button, Max!"
-Professor Fate
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"Here lies Scout. He ran fast, and died a virgin."
-Spy
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