Tanaka Hajime, new recruit of the Ouendan, could feel his heart beating fiercely in his chest. It hammered harshly as he stood in the frozen wasteland that was Earth. Everything he had trained for came down to this. He looked up at the dying sun and closed his eyes. Could he do it? Could he cheer his town on to safety? Could he cheer the WORLD on to peace? Deep down inside, Hajime doubted it. He didnt know how his superiors could handle it
---
If I fail
Hajime murmured lightly at the Ouendan Headquarters, which was hidden deep within a secret wrapped within an enigma that was veiled within a mystery, Everything will be over.
Ippongi Ryuuta, the Ouendan Leader, stared at the recruit, What did you say?
Hajime looked up at his superior, speaking up a little so he could properly hear the recruit, If I fail
Dont ever say that, Hajime, Ryuuta said, his breath escaped from his mouth with a hiss, You wont fail.
But
Ryuuta-san
You will NOT fail, The leader said sternly, Do you understand?
Hajime stared in surprise at Ryuuta, and spoke up, But
!
How long have you been a part of the Ouendan? Ryuuta asked. Hajime snapped to attention with a salute.
S
Six years, Sir! Hajime blinked at his superiors frown, and gulped, wondering if Ryuuta wanted a more specific answer, M
more or less.
Youre right, Hajime-kun, Ryuuta said with a smile, You are no longer a recruit. The Ouendan stared in rapture at the thought of it, You are a full fledged Ouendan. Those of Yuuhi town know you by name. They are familiar with your face. You have helped them countless times. They will be comfortable with you. You are to remain here and cheer them on. Doumeki-san and I shall
Youre going to other places
far away towns
for people that dont have saviors
Hajime repeated, avoiding Ryuutas gaze and glancing at the floor, Im going to be alone here.
You wont. Ryuuta nodded, Suzuki-san and Saitou-san will accompany you. He placed his hand on Hajimes shoulder, nodding lightly, Youll need them more than Kai-san and I. Hajime looked back up, but didnt look into his superiors face, too afraid to even look at him, Hajime-kun. When this is over, well all go out to celebrate.
Will the Cheer Girls come too?
Depends on whether they want to come or not, Ryuuta released Hajimes shoulder and smiled, But Id count on it. Hajimes eyes lit up. He had hardly seen the Cheer Girls; they were at such a higher league than he!
Well then, are you ready, Hajime-kun?
Y
Yes Sir! Hajime shouted, snapping to attention.
Then GO! The recruit nearly jumped and rushed from the room, his shoes clattering loudly as he went to help his townspeople.
---
Yuuhi towns population stood at the top of a hill. A huge, dying tree stood at its peak. It was far too cold for any plant life. At this rate
all of Earths life would die
The townspeople turned and blinked at Asahi towns population. They had also climbed the hill, where they could be closer to the sun. Both of the towns stared at each other. Each had been cheered by rival Ouendan groups
but now was not the time to fight amongst themselves.
Where are the Ouendan? Tsuyoshi asked no one in particular, hugging his brother close to him.
Mana held her arms and shuddered, Sister
Im just glad youre not here to see this
We cant give up! Kuroiwa shouted, Ouendan or not
! We cant keep waiting, we MUST do what we can on our own!
Dan and Joe pointed upwards, Right everyone! Lets
! The policemen were interrupted. A huge icy comet dropped to Earth, nearly crushing dozens of people.
Its HOPELESS!! Three housewives screamed in unison.
I dont want to die, Wan-chan!! Kumi cried, wrapping her arms dejectedly around the werewolf she fell in love with.
Wait!! The air is filled with a powerful voice that made everyones panic flee. They turned and stared at the newcomers. Just in time, it was Tanaka Hajime, Saitou Atsushi and Suzuki Ittetsu! They raised their arms in a V shape, IKUZEE!!
OUENDAN! The conjoined towns shouted in relief. The Ouendan cheered the people on. Osu! they shouted.
Nii-chan
Tsuyoshis brother clung to his brother and shivered madly.
Im not going anywhere. The Ouendan will save us! Tsuyoshi replied, smiling at Hajime. The recruit
no
the full fledged Ouendan swelled with pride. He would not give up! He WOULD not fail! For his people, his town, his family, his planet!!
OSU! Hajime shouted. The Ouendan of Yuuhi town began to cheer; both Yuuhi town and Asahi town followed suit and prepare for their work. UOOOOOO!!!
GOOOOOO!!!
Dont give up!
We can do it!
More! MORE!
Please, Sun! Please warm up!
OSU! Hajime continued to cheer. On his face was a serious, emotionless mask, but inside he was beaming. The light, the energy radiated from the Ouendan inspired the people, and they shouted louder, roaring and praying, begging and pleading with the sun, Dont go out! Please! Shower us with your love once again!
Gorou howled and pointed a furry paw at the ice that was creeping up at them, Its a wall of ice! He shouted. People rushed away as it crumbled towards them, but theyd never make it in time! Suddenly, out of nowhere, Moriyama and Gorou leap at the women, shoving them out of the way in time. No one is hurt from the forces of nature.
Alright! Good work everyone! Just
! Hajime suddenly felt a chill run down his spine, even colder than the biting snow on his face. Turning slightly, he gasped when he saw Asahi towns own Ouendan recruit, Kikuchi Shinta, with his backup cheerers, Moriyama Tsuyoshi and Sugita Kenshin. OSU! Shinta shouted, punching the air.
Everyone! Follow me! The young leader of the Asahi town Ouendan shouted. Hajime clenched his fist, and turned to the conjoined towns.
Everyone! Hajime screamed into the howling wind, Its me! Follow me!
Yuuhi Towns Ouendan stared in disbelief as everyone rushed to the side of Shinta, who raised his hand, Right! Ikuzee!!
Hajime stared, dumbfoundedly, as everyone passed by him, following the motions, responding to the cheers of young Shinta. Hajime dropped to his knees, anger welling up inside. Why
? Why was Shinta there? Why was he stealing everything? Shinta
!!!
Shinta smiled, his face beaming, a youthful glow was around him. A natural leader, Shinta, given time, would probably go far. He continued to cheer, sing, dance, and inspire. It worked. Everyone looked up at the sun and begged the sun to return to normal, Sun! Please! Dont go out! PLEASE!
The old and young are soon dragged away. They couldnt possibly continue to cheer; already they were too tired, This cant be
Its hopeless
Itll never stop
Dont give up! Shinta shouted.
Follow me! Hajime shouted. The two Ouendan teams both shouted loudly, one on each side of the hill.
We can do it! Shinta shouted.
Well revive the sun together!
Everyone! Listen to us!
No! Listen to US!
The towns were confused. Neither was sure who to follow. Hajime wondered if Ryuuta-san and Doumeki-san were having the same problem with rival Ouendan
Hajime looked up, and his eyes widened. He shut up and stared up at the sky.
Thats it! Shinta shouted, cheering, roaring, screaming. Everyone began to follow him as Hajime stared into the sky, his jaw dropping slightly.
Hajime-san, whats wrong? Suzuki asked. Hajime pointed up at the huge comet that was heading to earth. His arm trembled, and he spoke in a barely audible whisper:
Its going to hit
Its going
Hajimes breath caught in his throat, and he shouted into the cold, Its heading straight to the Asahis Ouendan!
Dammit! Saitou roared, What do we do, Hajime-san?
Shinta-san! Hajime shouted, rushing forward, Shinta-san, you have to move! You and the others have to move NOW!!!
Whether Shinta did hear he did not wish to listen, Hajime couldnt tell. Asahis Ouendan continued cheering, and Hajime felt his stomach churn, he felt like throwing up. There was a huge dilemma that he had to debate within himself.
An Ouendans job was to protect, to save, and to replenish. Under no circumstances were they allowed to let a person get hurt. However, an Ouendan was never allowed to place himself in harms way. It was their job to cheer until the person noticed the danger, so they could avoid it. It would have been a problem, but Shintas cheering, the towns screaming, and the howling wind made it impossible to be heard. Hajime clenched his fists and apologized to his superiors, Shinta-san!!!
Shinta turned when Hajime rushed at him. Asahis Ouendan glared daggers at the obvious attempt at taking the town by force, and he raised his hands in self defense. Hajime leapt from the ground, Suzuki and Saitou following close behind. Together, the Yuuhi towns Ouendan bodily shoved the Asahi towns Ouendan out of harms way. Hajime felt the comet crash into the planet, and into his frail, freezing body
Everything went black
---
Silence filled the huge hill. Everyone stared into the crater the comet created, and many refused to breathe until they knew for sure that this wasnt a dream. Shinta, still prostrate on the floor, stared at where he and his friends had been standing just moments before. Asahis Ouendan picked themselves up from the ground, and the young leader looked up at something fluttering in the wind. Hajimes black as night cap danced in the air, very similar to his graceful steps in life. Shinta reached out and the cap landed in his hand.
The sobs started. First the women, then the children, and soon everyone dropped to the snow, weeping, Its
its over
They sobbed, They
theyre gone
!
Ouendan! They shouted, Why? WHY?
Why
? Shinta asked, holding the cap in his hand, Why did you do that
Hajime-san
?
---
Hajime had learned that pain was good. It proved you were alive. Hajime wondered if he should be happy to be alive, or if he should curse the gods for letting him endure such torture. Crushed under tons of ice, slowly freezing to death
he just wished he could have
H
Hajime-san
?
I
Ittetsu-san? Hajime turned lightly, and despite the numbness, it sent ripples of pain through his body, You
re a
alive
?
Me too, Atsushi groaned, I
Ive been
Cheering
Hajime couldnt see them, but he did feel their energy. They were had been cheering. He assumed that was the only reason he was alive now, Its
the least we can do
We cant
Hajime suddenly said. He tried to wiggle his toes. Frostbite had killed them, Were
finished. R
Ryuuta-san
was wrong
He closed his eyes angrily at his weakness, I failed
we
I
m not
Never give up, Hajime-san! Ittetsu shouted, his voice cracking from his crushed larynx, We can handle this! We can help save the world! OUR world!
Im sorry! Hajime cried, I shouldnt have come! I wasnt ready for this! Now Ill never see anyone ever again! Ryuuta-san, Doumeki-san, the girls
! My
my brother, my family!! Hajime hyperventilated, his lungs burnt, and he wondered how he was still alive. He couldnt even feel his heart beating in his chest. Perhaps he wasnt even alive
?
Whats that
? Atsushis voice was heard over Hajimes rant. Ittetsu hushed the Ouendan, and Hajime could hear something
something that tugged at his heart as an Ouendan. He strained to make sure that it was true. Was it really what he thought it was?
...Ouendan
Someone was
...Dont leave us
Multiple people were
...Ouendan
dont go
! We NEED you
! Tears prickled at Hajimes eyes. Was it true?
...Hajime-san
...Atsushi-san
...Ittetsu-san
...Come back...! ....PLEASE...! They
! They were crying! They
they wanted him to
!
They
Hajime couldnt feel anything, but he knew
he was alive because he couldnt die yet
Yuuhi town
Asahi town
EVERYONE needed him! Dont
cry
He said, humming despite his damaged throat, Im here
Hajime-san
?
I cant give up
Hajime said, WE cant give up
! They need us!
The three nodded, OSU! They shouted as loud as they could.
---
Young Takuya lay in the snow, sniveling loudly, Im scared
Ouendan
dont go
we need you, Ouendan!
Something was heard in the back of his head. Takuya looked up, Wh
what was
?
Takuya? Shizu asked, staring at her son.
Takuya wasnt listening to his mother. He was straining to listen for what he thought he heard.
...osu...
Ouendan
?
...Osu...!
Ouendan! Youre
? Takuya stood up dizzily, and shivered in the wind. He shut his eyes tight and began to chant, Ou-En-Dan! He threw his fist into the air, and retracted it; Ou-En-Dan! his fist went out again into the biting wind.
Takuya
Shin said, reaching out to take his son away from the crater. Takuya refused to move.
Ou-! En-! Dan-! The child shouted, louder, louder, and louder than ever before, tears falling down his face and freezing before they ever touched the ground, Ou-En-DAN!
The people looked at each other, and soon they followed suit, Ou-En-Dan
! They shouted. It was soft at first, as the wind and snow ate any sound that came from their mouths, but soon it grew in volume as the town shouted louder and louder, Ou-En-Dan! Ou-En-Dan! Ou-En-Dan! Ou-En-Dan!!
Shinta looked around, and turned to his subordinates. They nodded, and the Asahi town Ouendan joined in, cheering like never before, Ou-En-Dan! OSU! Ou-En-Dan! OSU! Ou-En-Dan! OSU!
Ou-!! En-!! DAN!!!
---
Tanaka Hajime shuddered madly in the cold. He was still alive, and his body shivered in a futile attempt to keep him warm. Nevertheless, he continued to cheer, OSU! He was so tired; he couldnt even move. He fought sleep, and continued to shout, OSU! OSU!
A warmth flooded his body. He could hear them up above. The town was cheering. THEY were cheering for HIM. Hajime could move his numb fingers
wiggle his frostbitten toes. Their energy was small as one, but together, they formed the energy of at least an entire Ouendan squad! Hajime smiled, he could feel Shinta cheering as well. With all the energy, he knew that there was a way to escape, to be saved. He had to take that chance! Hajime felt the energy revitalize him, and he turned to his friends, Everyone
are you alright?
Hajime-san
Ittetsu said, We can do it!
With their help
Hajime smiled, and shouted, wriggling and preparing a cheer, Well do it!! Send your yells out! Well escape!
IKUZEE!!!
A small light was seen in the crater as the town screamed around the hole. They shouted and screamed and watched as the light grew in magnitude, spreading out of the crater and sending a beacon high into the sky to be seen from miles around. The ice cracked, and the towns and Ouendan refused to give up. They continued to chant, shout and cheer.
They shouted in delight when the ice broke apart, and leaping gracefully out of the frozen coffin was the Yuuhi town Ouendan! They had escaped! They landed at the edge of the crater (Hajime had to keep from toppling back in, in fact), and the Ouendan looked across at their rivals. Shinta grinned embarrassedly at Hajime, avoiding his gaze, and held out the cap for his rival to take back. How could Shinta look at Hajime after his selfless sacrifice
? The full fledged Ouendan smiled at the man and took the hat, reapplying it to his head. He felt complete again.
Shinta-san! Asahi towns Ouendan looked up at Hajime, and he smiled with a nod, holding his hand out. Shinta smiled and extended his hand. They locked arms and smiled happily.
Hajime-san, lets do our best! Together! Shinta said. Hajime nodded.
Yes, lets combine our power! Together, we can do anything!
The six Ouendan, now united, stood before the populous of Asahi and Yuuhi town. They shouted aloud, OSU! TATAKAE!
OUENDAN!! The town shouted back. Hajime wondered if he was ever injured. The pain was gone, not a scratch lay on him. Their energy revitalized him as if the comet had never crushed him. He decided to thank his friends the best way he could.
Ikuzee! The Ouendan roared, preparing for their last cheer.
San-!
Nii-!
Ichi-!
SURE!!
-End.












Devious Comments
Comments
but while I was reading I found this.
"Yuuhi towns population stood at the top of the huge, dying tree."
maybe you should change it to...
"Yuuhi towns population stood at the top of a hill with a huge, dying tree."
or something with them being on the hill...
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Yeah, so what if I'm a follower. Leaders would be absolutly nothing without us.
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Chickens are lucky, they don't even have to be hot and roosters fight over them!
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I love comments!
Dude I was thinking of how to write that sentence and I SCREWED IT UP. ROYALLY.
No wonder no one else is reading this!! *lolz*
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"I... I knew that... I was just testing you!"
-Booster
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"Push the Button, Max!"
-Professor Fate
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"Here lies Scout. He ran fast, and died a virgin."
-Spy
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Yeah, so what if I'm a follower. Leaders would be absolutly nothing without us.
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Chickens are lucky, they don't even have to be hot and roosters fight over them!
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I love comments!
Are his thoughts described in the game? (I can't tell because I can't read most Japanese to save my life.)
However, because of the passion of the Ouendan, I really wanted to relay it through all the characters. I really get peeved when the stories or pictures always give Hajime and Shinta girly or effeminate gestures and actions, because they really aren't all THAT bad...
Alright, maybe Shinta... but still *laugh*
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"I... I knew that... I was just testing you!"
-Booster
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"Push the Button, Max!"
-Professor Fate
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"Here lies Scout. He ran fast, and died a virgin."
-Spy
An Ouendan fanfic with NO YAOI WHATSOEVER.
And it\'s of COUNTDOWN,above all the stages in OTO2.
That earns you the interwebs*bows in respect*
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But I\'m glad you like the story. Personally I think make out love cheapens deeper relationships that involve brotherly love. That\'s why I write what I do. It\'s much better to have more relationships that aren\'t kissy-smooch. = D
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"I... I knew that... I was just testing you!"
-Booster
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"Push the Button, Max!"
-Professor Fate
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"Here lies Scout. He ran fast, and died a virgin."
-Spy
Hurr,that's how fun a typo can evolve to.
Yea,let'smakeout!luff is well...too overated.
And disturbing,especially with slash.
Fanfics have to be deeepppp~
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